Vaness
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강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Good construction of sentences.Keep it up.
-T.Vaness-
Welcome>>Welcome!
Good morning (afternoon, evening), ladies and gentlemen.
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On behalf of Captain OOO and the entire crew, Welcome aboard Korean Air flight OOO bound for OOO.
>> In behalf of Captain OOO and the entire crew, welcome aboard Korean Air flight OOO bound for OOO.
It is a pleasure to have you with us.
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Our flight time to OOO will be OOO minutes after take-off.
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Please make sure that your seat belt is securely fastened
>> Please make sure that your seat belt is securely fastened.
And refrain from smoking during the entire flight.
>> Refrain from smoking during the entire flight.
Also, the use of potable electronic devices is not allowed take- off and landing.
>> Also, the use of portable electronic devices is not allowed during take- off and landing.
If there is anything we can do to make your flight more comfortable, Our cabin attendants are happy to assist you.
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Please enjoy the flight.
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Thank you.
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