Vaness

2011-06-23 · 첨삭 강사 Bella

학생이 쓴 원문

Farewell(대한항공 도착 안내 방송) Ladies and gentlemen. Welcome to OOO. For your safety, please remain seated until the captain has turned off the seat belt sign. Before leaving the aircraft, please check to make sure That you have not left any items behind. Thank you for fling Korean Air, and We wish you a pleasant stay here in OOO.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]!

Nice sentence construction.Good job!I hope to see more of your writings.Good day!

-T.Vaness-

Farewell Ladies and gentlemen.

>> Farewell ladies and gentlemen.

Welcome to OOO.

>>Correct

For your safety, please remain seated until the captain has turned off the seat belt sign.

>>Correct

Before leaving the aircraft, please check to make sure That you have not left any items behind.

>>Before leaving the aircraft, please check to make sure that you have not left any items behind.

Thank you for fling Korean Air, and We wish you a pleasant stay here in OOO.

>> Thank you for flying Korean Air. We wish you a pleasant stay here in OOO.

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