Various animals

2021-05-03 · 첨삭 강사 Maine

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In the world, there are many animals. Among the animals, the funest animal is stingray. In the aquarium, few stingrays are in the fish tank. They always smile and swim slowly. I think that they always smile is very funny. Also, there are many cute animals. I think those are puppies. I have no dogs now, but my friend have a dog. When I see my friend’s dog, She is so lovely. So, I think the cutest animals in the world is puppies.

강사 첨삭

Hello Arim!
Thanks for doing your homework. ^^ Don\'t forget the correct sentences we learned.

-T. Maine

In the world, there are many animals.
>>Correct!
Among the animals, the funest animal is stingray.
>>Among the animals, the funniest is a stingray.
In the aquarium, few stingrays are in the fish tank.
>>Correct!
They always smile and swim slowly.
>>Correct!
I think that they always smile is very funny.
>>I think their smile is very funny.
>>Or: I think they look funny when they are smiling.
Also, there are many cute animals.
>>Correct!
I think those are puppies.
>>Correct!
I have no dogs now, but my friend have a dog.
>>I have no dogs now, but my friend has a dog.
When I see my friend’s dog, She is so lovely.
>>When I see my friend\'s dog, I think it is so lovely.
So, I think the cutest animals in the world is puppies.
>>So I think the cutest animals in the world are the puppies.

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