Various clubs
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I want to join baseball club and occult club.
>> I want to join a baseball and an occult club.
First, I want to join baseball club because I like baseball.
>> First, I want to join a baseball club because I like baseball.
I can\'t participate in real game, but I also like to talk about baseball with people who like baseball.
>> I can’t participate in a real game, but I like to talk about baseball with other people who are also interested in baseball.
I want to join occult club because this is newest club in my school.
>>Next, I want to join an occult club because this is the newest club in my school.
Also it never has club like that before.
>> Also, we never had a club like this before.
I love watching and experiencing creepy things provided that a lot of people gather with me!
>> I love watching and experiencing scary things with people around me.
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