Vasketball is the most popular game in winter.

2010-01-06 · 첨삭 강사 Shy

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Vasketball is the most popular game in winter. Because it is possble to play indoor I know that Filipino likes vasketball. In the past, There is very famous player Shin, Dong-Pa in Korea. I heard that he is the most popular player in Philipine. It is the old story. I heard it only. Anyway, It is very cold thesedays in Korea. The temperature is 10~15 below zero. i want to go to Sebu or Boracay ㅋㅋ I have never been there. It is my hope. Someday, I will do it. Can you believe it? ㅎㅎ If you have a chance to visit Korea, I hope to be your guide, the best guide.

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Hello again [이름]!! I hope I could visit Korea and I will call you to be my best guide.. ^_^ So if you can also go here in the Philippines, I will be your guide too.. Basketball is really a popular game here in the Philippines.. Only a few people play other sports… Anyway, be careful with your health because cold weather can cause some sickness… Take care always!   Xoxoxo, T. Shy   Here are my corrections for you:   Vasketball is the most popular game in winter.>> Basketball is the most popular game in winter. Because it is possble to play indoor >> Because it is possible to play indoorI know that Filipino likes vasketball.>> I know that Filipinos likes basketball. In the past, There is very famous player Shin, Dong-Pa in Korea.>> In the past, there was a very famous player Shin, Dong-Pa in Korea. I heard that he is the most popular player in Philipine.>> I heard that he is the most popular player in the Philippines. It is the old story. I heard it only.>> It is an old story. I only heard about it. Anyway,  it is very cold thesedays in Korea. >> Anyway, it is very cold in Korea these days. The temperature is 10~15 below zero.>> The temperature is -10 to -15. i want to go to Sebu or Boracay ㅋㅋ>> I want to go to Cebu or Boracay ㅋㅋ (It is very gorgeous in Cebu and Boracay) I have never been there. It is my hope.>> I have never been there. It is my wish. Someday, I will do it. Can you believe it? ㅎㅎ >> CORRECT (I believe it ^_^) If you have a chance to visit Korea, I hope to be your guide, the best guide. >> CORRECT (thank you so much, I’d appreciate it)

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