Vasketball is the most popular game in winter.
학생이 쓴 원문
Vasketball is the most popular game in winter.
Because it is possble to play indoor
I know that Filipino likes vasketball.
In the past, There is very famous player Shin, Dong-Pa in Korea.
I heard that he is the most popular player in Philipine.
It is the old story. I heard it only.
Anyway,
It is very cold thesedays in Korea.
The temperature is 10~15 below zero.
i want to go to Sebu or Boracay ㅋㅋ
I have never been there. It is my hope.
Someday, I will do it. Can you believe it? ㅎㅎ
If you have a chance to visit Korea,
I hope to be your guide, the best guide.
강사 첨삭
Hello again [이름]!!
I hope I could visit Korea and I will call you to be my best guide.. ^_^
So if you can also go here in the Philippines, I will be your guide too..
Basketball is really a popular game here in the Philippines.. Only a few people play other sports…
Anyway, be careful with your health because cold weather can cause some sickness…
Take care always!
Xoxoxo,
T. Shy
Here are my corrections for you:
Vasketball is the most popular game in winter.>> Basketball is the most popular game in winter.
Because it is possble to play indoor
>> Because it is possible to play indoorI know that Filipino likes vasketball.>> I know that Filipinos likes basketball.
In the past, There is very famous player Shin, Dong-Pa in Korea.>> In the past, there was a very famous player Shin, Dong-Pa in Korea.
I heard that he is the most popular player in Philipine.>> I heard that he is the most popular player in the Philippines.
It is the old story. I heard it only.>> It is an old story. I only heard about it.
Anyway, it is very cold thesedays in Korea.
>> Anyway, it is very cold in Korea these days.
The temperature is 10~15 below zero.>> The temperature is -10 to -15.
i want to go to Sebu or Boracay ㅋㅋ>> I want to go to Cebu or Boracay ㅋㅋ (It is very gorgeous in Cebu and Boracay)
I have never been there. It is my hope.>> I have never been there. It is my wish.
Someday, I will do it. Can you believe it? ㅎㅎ
>> CORRECT (I believe it ^_^)
If you have a chance to visit Korea, I hope to be your guide, the best guide.
>> CORRECT (thank you so much, I’d appreciate it)
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