Vegetarian
학생이 쓴 원문
I have never thought about being a vegetarian because I haven\'t been determined to quit eatig all kinds of meat. Of course I stopped consuming red meat because of my health, but I like to eat duck meat or chicken. Sometimes I feel guilty and uncomfortable when I cook or eat duck or chicken. That\'s why I am gradually reducing all kinds of meat. Instead, I increasingly consume various seafood and vegetables.
강사 첨삭
Hello, Gi [이름]!
Wonderful job on your sentences for this homework. I agree! I also feel guilty about eating animals; however, giving up meat can also mean losing some essential nutrients and vitamins that our body needs. I think we should carefully evaluate whether we are both mentally and physically ready to be vegetarians.
- T. Caitlyn
I have never thought about being a vegetarian because I haven\'t been determined to quit eatig all kinds of meat.
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Of course I stopped consuming red meat because of my health, but I like to eat duck meat or chicken.
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Sometimes I feel guilty and uncomfortable when I cook or eat duck or chicken.
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That\'s why I am gradually reducing all kinds of meat.
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Instead, I increasingly consume various seafood and vegetables.
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