Vegeterian diet Vs Meat centric diet
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I don\'t have any explicit opinion about this issue.
>> CORRECT!
However, in my mother\'s opinion, meat centric diet is much healthier than vegeterian diet.
>> However, my mother\'s opinion was meat centric diet is much healthier than vegeterian diet.
Because protein one of the most important material in humen body, and it is mostly contained in meat.
>> Because protein is one of the most important material in human body, and it is mostly contained in meat.
Even though beans are high protein food, it is not that sufficient for enough to afford man in puberty but also bodies of health of modern people who are saturated with busy schedule.
>> Even though beans are high protein foods, it is not that sufficient enough for a our body and for the health of modern people who are saturated with their busy schedule.
And I abolutely believe her opinion on food issue. So, the conclusion is I\'m on meat side.
>> And I absolutely agree with her opinion on food issue. So, the conclusion is I\'m on meat side.
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