Venus~

Did you enjoy your day? I hope you don't feel tired. Do you know I like venice in Italy? So I sometimes called you are venice by mistaken. Anyway, here are my answers. I ate with my family last holiday. My family are very busy, so we usually meet a special day. We ate beefsteaks at home. We talked about respective lifes. I talked about study that I'm having for getting a job. My mother talked about mountain clothes that she bought. She go to mountain climbing theses days She told us she bought mountain clothes but it doesn't look like well. My sister talked about her school life. She told us she likes to teach childrens but doesn't like a lot of office works. I felt very happy because I heard my family's story after a long time. Thank you Venus, I'll see you then.

Hello Venus,,, Thank you for dropping by… Here are my corrections for you.. Did you enjoy your day? >>CORRECTI hope you don't feel tired. >>I hope you were not tired. Or I hope you didn’t feel tired’Do you know I like venice in Italy? >>Do you know that I like Venice in Italy?So I sometimes called you are venice by mistaken. >>So sometimes, I call you Venice by mistake.Anyway, here are my answers. >>CORRECTI ate with my family last holiday. >>CORRECT My family are very busy, so we usually meet a special day. >> My family were very busy, so we usually met on a special day.We ate beefsteaks at home. We talked about respective lifes. >>CORRECTI talked about study that I'm having for getting a job.>>I told them about my studies and also about getting a job after’ My mother talked about mountain clothes that she bought.>>>>CORRECT She go to mountain climbing theses days >>She had experienced mountain climbing those days.She told us she bought mountain clothes but it doesn't look like well. >> She told us she bought mountain clothes but it doesn't look good.My sister talked about her school life. >>My sister talked about her school life.She told us she likes to teach childrens but doesn't like a lot of office works. >>She talod us she likes to teach children but she does,’t like lots of office works.I felt very happy because I heard my family's story after a long time. >>CORRECT