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2010-11-26 · 첨삭 강사 Verna

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This is my homework that is Question.9 I tried to make sentence, but grammar is not exact. Please, Find the wrong grammar and word. Thanks !! Q.9 There is the cycle competition in the picture. I think this competition is held near the beach. Because some of people wear the swimsuit. The middle of picture is two people who wear cycle colths and protection tools. They look like painful. I guess they've already run a plenty of road. A person who wear a swimsuit is running with cycle athletes. Many people are enjoying the competition. Verna, I have a question. I always confuse preposition's position. Example I know many people are preparing something for getting a job. But Answer is '---- to get a job' I want to know how I use to preposition appropriately.

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Hello there Lydia,      How are you doing? Thank you for doing your homework. This is a nice description of the photo. With regards to prepositions, let's talk about it later in the class. Ok? See you! Love, Verna This is my homework that is Question.9 >> This is my homework, it is question number 9 in our textbook.I tried to make sentence, but grammar is not exact. >> I tried to make sentences but I'm not sure if the grammar is correct.Please, Find the wrong grammar and word. >> Please, find my mistakes.Thanks !! >>CorrectQ.9There is the cycle competition in the picture. >>There is cycling cometition in the picture.I think this competition was held near the beach. >>CorrectBecause some of people wear the swimsuit. >>Because some people are wearing swimsuit.The middle of picture is two people who wear cycle colths and protection tools. >>In the middle of the picture, there are two people who are wearing cycling clothes and protection gear.  They look like painful. I guess they've already run a plenty of road. >>They look tired.  I guess they've already run a long road.A person who wear a swimsuit is running with cycle athletes. >>CorrectMany people are enjoying the competition. >>CorrectVerna, I have a question. >>CorrectI always confuse preposition's position. >> I'm always confuse on how to use the preposition.Example I know many people are preparing something for getting a job. >>Example, I know many people are preparing something for getting a job.But Answer is '---- to get a job' >>But the answer is '... to get a job'I want to know how I use to preposition appropriately. >>I want to know how to use prepostions correctly.

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