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Theme: [ESSAY] Which do you think is worst: being out in uncomfortably hot weather or uncomfortably cold weather?
I like cold weather more then hot weather.
Its because I get hot easily.
When I am hot, I got humid and angry.
But when I am cold, I just am cold.
So, I like cold weather more than hot weather!
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Theme: [ESSAY] Which do you think is worst: being out in uncomfortably hot weather or uncomfortably cold weather?
I like cold weather more then hot weather.
>> I like cold weather more than hot weather. [Mind the spelling of \"than\".]
>> OR: I prefer cold weather to hot.
Its because I get hot easily.
>> It\'s because I feel hot easily. [Mind the apostrophe in \"it\'s\".]
When I am hot, I got humid and angry.
>> When I am hot, I feel the humidity, so I get sweaty and become angry.
But when I am cold, I just am cold.
>> CORRECT~~
So, I like cold weather more than hot weather!
>> OR: That\'s why I prefer the cold weather.
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