Very cold day

2015-11-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kris

학생이 쓴 원문

Today is very cold day.Because it is winter.Today in seoul, we can see the snow.It is first snow in seoul this year.I like snowy day except cold. I really hate rainy day. But I like snowy day.All people said "I'm cold.",I am very cold too.I want to wearing 10jacket and two gloves and hat.

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름]! ^^ Good evening. So, winter is already there in your country. That is great! ^^ Wear thick jackets to protect you from the coldness of the weather. Always cover your nose as well. Happy winter. ^^ I will see you in our class. :)Take care always. :)   ~~ Teacher Kris   Today is very cold day. Because it is winter. >> Today is a very cold day because it is winter. Today in seoul, we can see the snow. >> Today, in Seoul, we are seeing the snow. It is first snow in seoul this year. >> It is the first snow in Seoul this year. I like snowy day except cold. >> I like the snowy day except for the cold.  I really hate rainy day. >> I really hate the rainy day. But I like snowy day. >>  But,  like the snowy day. All people said \"I\'m cold.\",I am very cold too. >> All people said, \" I feel cold\" and I said, \"I feel cold too.\" I want to wearing 10jacket and two gloves and hat. >> I want to wear 10 jackets and 2 gloves and a hat.

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