Very cold day
학생이 쓴 원문
Today is very cold day.Because it is winter.Today in seoul, we can see the snow.It is first snow in seoul this year.I like snowy day except cold. I really hate rainy day. But I like snowy day.All people said "I'm cold.",I am very cold too.I want to wearing 10jacket and two gloves and hat.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! ^^
Good evening. So, winter is already there in your country.
That is great! ^^ Wear thick jackets to protect you from the coldness of the
weather. Always cover your nose as well.
Happy winter. ^^
I will see you in our class. :)Take care always. :)
~~ Teacher Kris
Today is very cold day. Because it is winter.
>> Today is a very cold day because it is winter.
Today in seoul, we can see the snow.
>> Today, in Seoul, we are seeing the snow.
It is first snow in seoul this year.
>> It is the first snow in Seoul this year.
I like snowy day except cold.
>> I like the snowy day except for the cold.
I really hate rainy day.
>> I really hate the rainy day.
But I like snowy day.
>> But, like the snowy day.
All people said \"I\'m cold.\",I am very cold too.
>> All people said, \" I feel cold\" and I said, \"I feel cold too.\"
I want to wearing 10jacket and two gloves and hat.
>> I want to wear 10 jackets and 2 gloves and a hat.
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