VERY GOOD┏√守───━

2014-03-10 · 첨삭 강사 Chloe

학생이 쓴 원문

I was very good today. I went to the academy. In my academy, i eat cup noodle with my friends. It was very delicious. I thought that is very spicy. It was not bad today.┏√守───━

강사 첨삭

I think you really like eating noodles. Oh, good to hear from you that you had a very good day Mike. I hope that you will another very good day tomorrow. Enjoy your life and make some special things. Have a good night dear. -Teacher Chloe I was very good today. >>I had a very good day. >>It was very good today. I went to the academy. >>Correct!In my academy, i eat cup noodle with my friends. >>In the academy, I ate cup noodles with my friends. It was very delicious. >>Correct! I thought that is very spicy. >>I thought it is very spicy. It was not bad today.┏√守───━ >>Correct!

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