Very long no see. Today also i'm posting my homework without exception.

2012-12-18 · 첨삭 강사 Alice

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Hi, Alice, Did you have good time?, I mean you would go to shopping for uncoming Christmas gifts. ( Did you happen to buy gifts for me? haha!) Anyhow, as i wrote on homework before, i prepared rental equipments for our patrons and served them. On this weekend, among many visitors, foreigners from various countries also had come and gone. Thanks to their visits, i could have more chances to have time to communicate with them in English. Of course, i could ask them only about just...um..."Where are you from?, How long will you stay in Koree. If i had more time to talk to them, i would have been missed that time so much. I have many questions that i'd like to ask them about what is famous for your country, In your country, most people are so hansome or pretty like you, etc. During it peak season in my office, you know... we will be more busy than now. About this, it makes me rather unstable. However, i'm sure that i can enjoy the hard time if i try hard to study English hoping to have

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Hi there [이름]! Thank you so much for this one. I like it so much when you tell me so many things about your day. I actually like reading and writing. I am so pleasured when I see my students writing compositions. I think you really enjoy doing your part time job. Aside from enjoying your job functions, you also get to talk wth foreigners. You are smart and hardworking. I\'m pretty sure, you can ask those questions in no time. Do that thing and make money. Hahaha! ^^ Call you later [이름]! ~ Teacher Alice Hi, Alice, Did you have good time? >> Hi Alice, did you have a good time? >> OR Hi Alice! Did you have a good time? I mean you would go to shopping for uncoming Christmas gifts. >> I mean you would go shopping for upcoming Christmas gifts. ( Did you happen to buy gifts for me? haha!) >> Correct! ^^ Haha! I would if I only knew where to send them!^^ Anyhow, as i wrote on homework before, i prepared rental equipments for our patrons and served them. >> Anyhow, as I wrote my homework before, I prepared rental equipment for our patrons and served them. *Don\'t forget to capitalize the first singular pronoun, \"I\". *There is no such thing as equipments. It is a collective noun, hence, you can\'t pluralize it. On this weekend, among many visitors, foreigners from various countries also had come and gone. >> Correct! >> OR This weekend, among many visitors, foreigners from various countries also had come and gone. Thanks to their visits, i could have more chances to have time to communicate with them in English. >> Thanks to their visits, I could have more chances to have time to communicate with them in English. *Capitalize \"I\". >> OR Thanks to their visits, I could have more chances to communicate with them in English. Of course, i could ask them only about just...um...\"Where are you from?, How long will you stay in Koree. >> Of course, I could ask them only about just...um...\"Where are you from? How long will you stay in Korea?\"If i had more time to talk to them, i would have been missed that time so much. >> If I had more time to talk to them, I would have missed that time so much. I have many questions that i\'d like to ask them about what is famous for your country, In your country, most people are so hansome or pretty like you, etc. >> I have many questions that I\'d like to ask them about, \"What is famous in your country,\" \"In your country, are most people so handsome or pretty like you,\" etc. During it peak season in my office, you know... we will be more busy than now. About this, it makes me rather unstable. >> During the peak season in my office, as you know, we will be busier than now.*Busier not busy. About this, it makes me rather unstable. >> Correct! However, i\'m sure that i can enjoy the hard time if i try hard to study English hoping to have >> However, I\'m sure that I can enjoy the hard time if I try to study English hard. I am hoping to have.  

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