Very simple
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was child, I can\'t very simply thing but not healthy thing.
Like eating all the big ice cream by myself, and lay down on a bed eating a whole box of chewing candy.
When I was young my parents told me every time, don\'t do that.
But now I\'m adult.
It\'s just simply thing I can do it.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
You must\'ve had a sugar rush all the time when you were a kid. Hahaha!
When I was child, I can\'t very simply thing but not healthy thing.
>> When I was a child, I eat almost everything but not healthy foods.
Like eating all the big ice cream by myself, and lay down on a bed eating a whole box of chewing candy.
>> I liked eating big ice creams by myself, laying down on the bed while eating a box of chewy candies.
When I was young my parents told me every time, don\'t do that.
>> My parents always told me to not do that.
But now I\'m adult.
>> But now that I am an adult, I can all those things already.
It\'s just simply thing I can do it.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
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