Vest travel country

2023-12-11 · 첨삭 강사 Nikki

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I think Bethnam is vest for travel. That\'s why that has many market or night market,temples and buy many beautiful products!! So I think vest travel country is Bethnam.

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I think Bethnam is vest for travel. 
>> I think the best country to travel to someday is Vietnam. 

That\'s why that has many market or night market,temples and buy many beautiful products!! 
>> It has so many night markets, temples, and stores where you buy many beautiful products!! 

So I think vest travel country is Bethnam.
>> That\'s why in my opinion, it\'s the best place to travel someday. 

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