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I think that those with power lose their morality. I feel that corruption occurs and is widespread in society because I believe it is the privilege of the powerful class to take unreasonable profits for their own benefit.
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Good afternoon, [이름]!^^
Thank you for sharing your perspective. It’s true that power can sometimes lead to ethical lapses and corruption. Addressing these issues requires both systemic changes and individual accountability.
~Kelly^^
I think that those with power lose their morality.
>> Correct
OR:
>> I believe that people in positions of power often lose their sense of morality.
I feel that
corruption occurs and is widespread in society because I believe it is
the privilege of the powerful class to take unreasonable profits for
their own benefit.
>> Correct
OR:
>>I feel that corruption is widespread in society because the powerful class often takes unreasonable profits for their own benefit.
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