Vice president!
학생이 쓴 원문
When I was in elementary or middle school, I run for the vice president election, and I think I had the most courage then. Because, I really like to go out and do something, and I like to have a discussion or debate and get something good out of it. Of course, I can\'t get the results I want right away. It takes as much courage as I like it, and I have to go through a lot of failures and setbacks, this is why I become a vice president with good results in 6th grade. Based on this, the middle school vice president election was also held. Obviously, if elementary school was still a little more open-minded, middle school had a feeling of silence... However, when I presented the most important speech, I think I did it with a good mind control, more seriously, but boldly. However, the result was unexpectedly a different person...but I thought! God is telling me to become school president in the next election~!
강사 첨삭
Good late evening Maria!
I think that running for the vice president position is a very courageous act already. The responsibility that comes along with being a vice president requires even requires more courage and patience. I know you have all these qualities of a great leader. Stay tough and be the next president!
Thanks for doing your homework. See you again soon!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
Because, I really like to go out and do something, and I like to have a discussion or debate and get something good out of it.
>> Correct!
Of course, I can\'t get the results I want right away.
>> Correct!
It takes as much courage as I like it, and I have to go through a lot of failures and setbacks, this is why I become a vice president with good results in 6th grade.
>> It takes as much courage as I like and I have to go through a lot of failures and setbacks. This is why I became the vice president with good results in the 6th grade.
Based on this, the middle school vice president election was also held.
>> Correct!
Obviously, if elementary school was still a little more open-minded, middle school had a feeling of silence...
>> Correct!
However, when I presented the most important speech, I think I did it with a good mind control, more seriously, but boldly.
>> Correct!
However, the result was unexpectedly a different person...but I thought! God is telling me to become school president in the next election~!
>> Correct!
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