victims
학생이 쓴 원문
Sexual crimes are happened by assailant, so we should blame and punish not victims regardless of gender.
But I think it might be dangerous that some women try to tempt using sexual attraction and exposed clothing.
I have ever seen several times who are drucken women in the street at night with exposed clothing.
I was worried about her safty.
Anyway we should respect others\' human right regardless of gender.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [이름]!
Yes, a person won\'t be harming others if it is not his nature regardless of the people around him. It is similar to a married person even if there are temptations around him/her, that person won\'t be bothered unless he/she is willing to commit a mistake. Temptation is always there. it is just how a person handles it.
Se you!
Aki~
Sexual crimes are happened by assailant, so we should blame and punish not victims regardless of gender.
>>> Sexual crimes are done by assailants, so we should blame and punish not the victims regardless of gender.
But I think it might be dangerous that some women try to tempt using sexual attraction and exposed clothing.
>>> But I think it might be dangerous that some women try to tempt others using sexual attraction and exposed clothing.
I have ever seen several times who are drucken women in the street at night with exposed clothing.
>>> I have ever seen several times drunken women on the street at night with exposed clothing.
I was worried about her safety.
>>> CORRECT!
Anyway, we should respect others\' human rights regardless of gender.
>>> CORRECT!
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