Video games
학생이 쓴 원문
9/9 homework:
I think video games are good for our speacial time. Because when you tired, bored,or blue,you make it. You maybe get more energe. Video games over, you can get better conditianal. Playing video games is a course of healing for someone.
Thank you teacher, have a nice day. And let see tomorrow.
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For one\'s free time or hobby, they can play games to relax. Sometimes, violent games can be stressful. Therefore, choosing the games to play determines stress or relaxation.
Read and compare the suggestions I mage in red texts below. Over time, you will get better.
Keep up the good work!
See you in class.
-T. Donna~
>> I think video games are good for our special time. Because when you are tired, bored, or blue, you can do it. Maybe, you get more energy. Through video games, you can get a better condition. Playing video games is a course of healing for someone.
Thank you teacher, have a nice day. And let see tomorrow.
>> Thank you teacher. Have a nice day. Let us meet tomorrow.
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