Violation of the principles. Why abortion is illegal?
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T. Glenda
Before i get started, I am going to define the term called \'human being\'.
>> Before I get started, I am going to define the term \'human being\'.
I guess human being definitely includes the concepts of humanity.
>> Correct
or
>> Human being definitely includes the concepts of humanity.
And when it comes to humanity, it contains sense, perception from outside, emotions, desires, expectation for better life and rational thinking... etc.
>> Correct
So could we dare to say that Fetus has no trait to be a human being?
>> Correct
Fetus is under the particular circumstance that it cannot control its body. And its life is totally up to its mother.
>> Correct
or
>> Fetus is under the particular circumstance that it cannot control its body, and its life totally depends on its mother.
It is a just tiny creature. But it develops its sense gradually.
>> It is just a tiny creature, but it develops its senses gradually.
I found the article related to fetus.
>> I found an article related to fetus.
In this article, fetus is able to perceive the sense of touch at 3 week gestation; evidence of humanity.
>> In this article, fetus can perceive the sense of touch at 3 week gestation; an evidence of humanity.
It clearly developed its perceptional capacity with nutrition.
>> Correct
And when it(he) go out from the mother\'s womb, he might get a enormous potential for successful life.
>> And when it(he) goes out from the mother\'s womb, it (he) might get an enormous potential for successful life.
He can bloom his humanity.
>> He can thrive as human being.
How dare to say to go for abortion?
>> How dare we say go for abortion?
Glenda, i will go to recruit about 2018 Inter-Korean summit on Friday.
>> I will go to the 2018 Inter-Korean Summit on Friday.
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