violet's homework haha

2017-09-20 · 첨삭 강사 Lorna

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HOMEWORK: Directions: Use the following words in a sentence. 1. many:I have many books 2. amazing:My mom don't have amazing booksㅜ.ㅜ 3. went:I went to the cruch at sunday 4. doing:I am doing homework 5. photos:I like photos 6. computer:mom use the computer every day 7. story:I know a korean stoy 8. English:I am doing english

강사 첨삭

Hey there, my dear Violet!:)

Happy Wednesday to you over there.

I am so happy because you did your homework.

Anyway, when we write a sentence, we should put a period at the end of the sentence.

We should start writing the sentence using capital letter for the first word.

Most of your sentence is gramattically correct, my dear Violet :). You are really smart. Good job!:)

I will see you later!:)


~T. Lorna^-^


1. many:I have many books

>> I have many books.
2. amazing:My mom don\'t have amazing booksㅜ.ㅜ

>> My mom doesn\'t have amazing books.
3. went:I went to the cruch at sunday

>> I went to the church last Sunday.
4. doing:I am doing homework 

>> I am doing my homework.
5. photos:I like photos

>> I like photos.
6. computer:mom use the computer every day

>> Mom use the computer everyday.
7. story:I know a korean stoy

>> I know a Korean story.
8. English:I am doing english

>> I am studying English.

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