violet's homework n.5
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
ESSAY WRITING:
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 10.
Question:Do you want to become an actress? Why?Why not?:I don't want to be a actress.because i don't like that.
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Violet!:)
How are you doing this Saturday?
I hope that you are having fun today!:)
Thank you for doing your homework.
I really appreciate it.Keep up!
~ T. Lorna^-^
I don\'t want to be a actress.because i don\'t like that.
>> I don\'t want to be an actress because I don\'t like what they do. I want to be a vet or a writer someday. It is not my dream tobecome an actress.
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