violet's homework n.7
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
ESSAY WRITING:
Directions: Answer the question using complete sentences not more than 10.
Question: How many friends do you have? What do you usually do when you are with your friends:I tallk abaut scary storyes and I play games
강사 첨삭
Hey there, Violet!:)
How are you doing this Saturday?
I hope that you are having fun today!:)
Thank you for doing your homework.
I really appreciate it.Keep up!
~ T. Lorna^-^
I tallk abaut scary storyes and I play games
>> I have 2 friends(example). I usually talk about scary games with them. I play game with them too. I like to be with my friends because it is fun.
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