violet's n.10 years old homework(?) :)

2018-08-07 · 첨삭 강사 Alexia

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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY: Why are numbers so important? What is your favorite number? Why is it your favorite number? Answer in complete sentences:My favorite number is 7.because 7 is a lucky number.

강사 첨삭

Hi Violet,


Thank you for doing your homework. ^^


T. Alexia


HOMEWORK:


Why are numbers so important?
What is your favorite number? Why is it your favorite number? Answer in complete sentences.


YOUR ANSWER:


My favorite number is 7.because 7 is a lucky number.


CORRECTIONS:


My favorite number is 7, because 7 is a lucky number.


**Hi Violet, comma should be put between 7 and because,  not period. Also, there should be a spacing between the two. 

   That\'s all about it. ^^ Thank you and have a good night. ^^


T. Alexia

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