violet's n.10 years old homework(?) :)
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Hi Violet,
Thank you for doing your homework. ^^ Please take note of the corrections below.
HOMEWORK:
What was something fun you did this week?
Answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
Today I go to the department stroe.it was fun!
CORRECTIONS:
Today, I went to a department store. It was fun!
** Violet dear, don\'t forget the spacing between words like I\'m always telling you. Also, bear in mind the correct tenses of the verb, like instead of \"go,\" it should be \"went.\" Another thing you forgot was the first letter\'s capitalization of the first word of the sentence. For your article \"the\" in the sentence, better use \"a.\"
That\'s all. ^^ Take note of the corrections, okay? Thank you. ^^
Take care.
T. Alexia
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