visa

2018-01-08 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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I haven't heard any response about my visa processing yet. I am considering to prolong my stay maximal upto 3 weeks in September using my yearly vacation. Is this OK to you?

강사 첨삭

Hi [이름] [이름].

I apologize for being absent last Friday. I\'m not sure if you already sent this letter to Dr. [Name], nevertheless, I made few corrections.

See you tonight!

Have a lovely day!

Amanda ^-^


Dear [Name]. [Name],


For fresh samples, I will try to collect them as many as I can.

>> For fresh samples, I will try to collect as many as I can.

Please provide me the requirement of tissue for RNA sequencing including size, and the form (tissue itself or extracted RNA), and whether you need lesional and perilesional skin together.

>> OR: Please provide me the tissue requirements for RNA sequencing including the size, and form (tissue itself or extracted RNA), and whether you need lesional and perilesional skin together.        

Best,
[이름] [이름]


REVISED:


Dear [Name]. [Name],


For fresh samples, I will try to collect as many as I can.  Please provide me the tissue requirements for RNA sequencing including the size, and form (tissue itself or extracted RNA), and whether you need lesional and perilesional skin together.  

Thank you.


Best,
[이름] [이름]

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VISA:


I haven\'t heard any response about my visa processing yet.

>> Correct

I am considering to prolong my stay maximal upto 3 weeks in September using my yearly vacation.

>>  I am considering to prolong my stay for a maximum of 3 weeks in September using my yearly vacation.

>> OR: I am considering to prolong my stay until the third week of September using my yearly vacation.


 Is this OK to you?

>> Is this okay with you?

>> OR:  I hope this is okay with you.


REVISED: VISA

I haven\'t heard any response about my visa processing yet.

 I am considering to prolong my stay for a maximum of 3 weeks in September using my yearly vacation. Is this okay with you?



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