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2018-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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Hello, Ms.Christine, Happy New Year to you! All documents that you requested were attached to this mail. "Form A" and "J1Physician" with my signature was separately scanned and attached. Please proceed J1 visa process for myself. I don't have any dependents. Please find them and feel free to contact me if something is missing or wrong. In terms of English Language Proficiency, I need Dr. [Name]'s certification. Thank you~ Best regards, [이름] Dear [Name]. [Name] I need your assistance to complete the English Language Proficiency Form. I have a copy of TOEIC test last year but not TOEFL or IELTS. Please fill the interview note part by the Sponsoring Professor. Thank you in advance. Best, [이름]

강사 첨삭

   

Hi [이름] [이름],

Good afternoon!

Please check the revised version of your letter below.

I didn\'t change much as there\'s not much to change. ^-^

See you tonight!

Amanda ^-^



Hello, Ms.Christine,

Happy New Year to you!
All documents that you requested were attached to this mail.
\"Form A\" and \"J1Physician\" with my signature was separately scanned and attached.
Please proceed J1 visa process for myself. I don\'t have any dependents.
Please find them and feel free to contact me if something is missing or wrong.
In terms of English Language Proficiency, I need Dr. [Name]\'s certification.
Thank you~

Best regards,
[이름]

Dear [Name]. [Name]
I need your assistance to complete the English Language Proficiency Form.
I have a copy of TOEIC test last year but not TOEFL or IELTS.
Please fill the interview note part by the Sponsoring Professor.
Thank you in advance.
Best,
[이름]


REVISED:


Hello, Ms. [Name],

Happy New Year to you!
All the documents you requested were attached to this e-mail.
The \"Form A\" and \"J1Physician\" with my signature was separately scanned and attached.
Please proceed with the J1 visa process for myself. I don\'t have any dependents. Feel free to contact me if something is missing or wrong.
In terms of my English language proficiency, I need Dr. [Name]\' certification.
Thank you.

Best regards,
[이름]



Dear [Name]. [Name],

How are you?
I need your assistance to complete the English Language Proficiency Form, please. I have a copy of my TOEIC test last year but not TOEFL or IELTS.
Please fill out the interview note part by the sponsoring professor.
 

Thank you in advance.


Best,
[이름]

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