Visa interview1

2018-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Amanda

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What is your purpose of applying for an U.S. VISA? Why are you going to the States? A) I am a dermatologist in the Catholic University of Korea. You know, physicians go on a visiting scholarship. I am going to the States for my sabatica. Why are you participating in the program? Which University will you go to? A) I will go to University California of Irvine. Why did you choose the University? How did you find out him? Dr. [Name] is a PhD., and his major is cell biology, however, he had been in dermatology Lab for a long time. And his current research work is oriented to skin and hair stem cells. You know the collaboration between physicians and PhD is a research trend these days. A) Dr. [Name] has been to Korea for giving a lecture. It was very impressive and his long term goal is the same with mine. That’s why I chose to visit him. Is your English good enough for your training? A) ? (I don't know what to say Do you have any English Proficiency score? A) I have TOEIC score here.

강사 첨삭

What is your purpose of applying for an U.S. VISA?
Why are you going to the States?
A) I am a dermatologist in the Catholic University of Korea. You know, physicians go on a visiting scholarship. I am going to the States for my sabatica.
Why are you participating in the program?
Which University will you go to?
A) I will go to University California of Irvine.
Why did you choose the University?
How did you find out him?
Dr. [Name] is a PhD., and his major is cell biology, however, he had been in dermatology Lab for a long time. And his current research work is oriented to skin and hair stem cells. You know the collaboration between physicians and PhD is a research trend these days.
A) Dr. [Name] has been to Korea for giving a lecture. It was very impressive and his long term goal is the same with mine. That’s why I chose to visit him.
Is your English good enough for your training?
A) ? (I don\'t know what to say
Do you have any English Proficiency score?
A) I have TOEIC score here.



REVISED:

What is your purpose of applying for an U.S. VISA? Why are you going to the States?

A.) I\'m applying for a U.S. Visa because I need to attend a visiting scholar program in the US.

 
Why are you participating in the program?

A)I am a dermatologist in the Catholic University of Korea. You know, physicians (optional: sometimes) go on a visiting scholarship. I am going to the States for my sabbatical.


OR: A.) I am a dermatologist in the Catholic University of Korea and sometimes, physicians need to attend a visiting scholar program in another country.


Which University will you go to?
A) I will go to the University of California, Irvine.



Why did you choose the University?

A.) I chose that university because of Dr. [Name].


How did you find out him?

A) Dr. [Name] have been in Korea for one of his lectures. It was very impressive and his long term goal is the same with

mine that\'s why I chose to visit him.

A) Dr. [Name] is a PhD., and his major is cell biology, however, he has been working in a dermatology Lab for a long time. And his current research work is oriented to skin and hair stem cells. The collaboration between physicians and PhD is a research trend these days.


OR: A.) Dr. [Name] have been in Korea for his lectures. It was very impressive and we have the same long term goals in our chosen field. He is a PhD and his major is Cell Biology however, he has been working in a dermatology laboratory for a long time. His current research is oriented to skin and hair stem cells. It is a trend these days that a physician and PhD collaborate together.


Is your English good enough for your training?
A) ? (I don\'t know what to say
*** I am not that familiar with several American idioms and expressions, but I am knowledgeable where it matters, which is in the field of dermatology. I can understand and explain dermatology terms in English.
 
Do you have any English Proficiency score?
A) I have my TOEIC score here.

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