Visa interview3
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
A)My name is [이름] [이름] [이름]. I am a dermatologist in the Catholic Univ. of Korea. I am 38 years old. I have a plan to go on a visiting scholarship to the U.S..
2. What do you do?
a. Are you currently a student? If so, what is your major?
b. Are you currently working? If so, what is your position?
A) I am a doctor and assistant professor in the Catholic Univ. of Korea.
4. Have you been to the U.S. before? If so, for what purpose?
A) I have been to the U.S several times. The purpose of the visit was mostly sightseeing and attending a conference.
8. How much will you get paid?
A) I do not get any financial support from the UCI. Instead my current hospital will support me during my stay.
What do you expect for the training in the U.S?
A) I have a plan to have a long relationship with people whom I will meet in the States.
This visit will enables me to make global relationship and collaboration for the future.
REVISED:
Please introduce yourself.
A)My name is [이름] [이름] [이름]. I am a dermatologist at the Catholic University of Korea. I am 38 years old. I have a plan to go on a visiting scholarship to the U.S..
OR: My name is [이름] [이름] [이름]. I am 38 years old. I work as a dermatologist at the Catholic University of Korea. I\'m planning to go to the US as a visiting scholar.
2. What do you do?
a. Are you currently a student? If so, what is your major?
b. Are you currently working? If so, what is your position?
A) I am a doctor and an assistant professor at the Catholic university of Korea.
4. Have you been to the U.S. before? If so, for what purpose?
A) I have been to the U.S. several times. The purpose of my previous visits were mostly for sightseeing. I also attended some conference there several times.
8. How much will you get paid?
A) I will not receive any kind of financial support from the UCI, instead my current hospital will support me financially during my stay.
What do you expect for the training in the U.S?
A) I am hoping to have a long-term relationship with people whom I will meet in the US. This visit will enable me to make a global relationship and collaboration for future research.
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