Visit to the Gyungbok place

A few days ago, my friend's american friends, who are a couple and I've met them in the US, visited to Korea. So, my friends and I took them to the Gyungbok palace and lunch today. Actually, at first, we went to the Duksoo palace in order to see replacing royal guard, which is held in front of the palace. Unfortunately, something was going on out there so it was cancled. Instead, we went to the blue house where the Korean president lives. The security was very strict so that we couldn't cross the road to the side of the president's house. They blew the whestle as soon as we tried to do. Next, we went to Samchung-Dong to have lunch. At last, the Gyungbok palace and the Korean folk museum were the last destination for us.

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