visited grandmother's house┏√守───━
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
It was nice of you to write something about your weekend. I know that this activity will help you improve your skills in writing so keep it up. Have the passion to learn new thing so that you can achieve your goals in speaking the English language.
Have fun!!!
T. Chloe
I visited my grandmother\'s house.
>>correct
It was not bad.
>>correct
OR>>It was not that bad.
I slept once day in my grandmother\'s house.
>>I slept for a day in my grandmother\'s house.
I like it.
>>correct
My sister went to my grandmother\'s house, too.
>>correct
OR>>My sister also went to my grandmother\'s house.
My sister like it.
>>My sister liked it.
I watched a television yesterday.
>>I watched the television yesterday.
>>I watched a TV program yesterday.
But my sister more watched television than me.
>>But my sister watched the TV more than me.
It was great day.
>>It was a great day.^^
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