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I visited a small country, Panama, it is known for just canal connecting Eastern to western. It is locate in South America near Mexico. I just expected the vigorous thing of exciting. But you know, there was no food paired perfectly with us. So it is hard to find out delicious food in this country. I think i just expect too much so when i see this country for the first time, i just felt frustrated.
There was no exciting things and delicious foods there were only hot weather and someone that look dangerous. But i think i couldn’t experience everything in the country. So if i had a chance to go there, i would search good places before visiting.
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I appreciate you writing about your travel experience in an interesting country, [이름]! This is also new to me, so I was amazed.-Faith-
I visited a small country, Panama.>> I visited a small country, Panama.
it is known for just canal connecting Eastern to western.
>> It is known for its canal connecting the eastern to the western part.
It is locate in South America near Mexico.
>> It is located in South America near Mexico.
I just expected the vigorous thing of exciting.
>> I just expected the vigorous thing there.
But you know, there was no food paired perfectly with us.
>> However, there was no food paired perfectly with us.
So it is hard to find out delicious food in this country.
>> Thus, it was hard to find out delicious food in this country.
I think i just expect too much so when i see this country for the first time, i just felt frustrated.
>> I think I just expected too much, so when I saw this country for the first time, I just felt frustrated.
There was no exciting things and delicious foods.
There was no exciting things and delicious foods.
>> There were no exciting things and delicious foods there.
there were only hot weather and someone that look dangerous
>> There was only hot weather and someone that looked dangerous.
OR Unfortunately, I just endured the scorching heat there and met threatening people.
But i think i couldn’t experience everything in the country.
>> I could not experience everything in the country.
So if i had a chance to go there, i would search good places before visiting.
>> Therefore, if I had a chance to go there again, I would search good places before visiting.
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