Visiting Gyeongju~

I went to my cousin's house in Gyeongju. Gyeongju is the capital of the Silla dynasty so it has many historic sites such as Chum-sung-dea, Chun-ma-Chong etc. I visited An-ab-ji which was built in 674 and has many adjunct buildings and artificial lakes. It was a place for holding a banquet or greeting guests. There're lots of people who came to see the beautiful night scenery.(especially foreigners) The reflections of the old castles in the lake had mysterious charm. We took a lot of pictures and had a good time.I hope you can visit Gyeongju someday too^_^ p.s.Have you ever been to any Korean's historic sites?

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