Vocabulary
학생이 쓴 원문
[Tour]
These days, the one-day tour is popular since we can enjoy both activities and relaxation.
[Tourism]
After pandemic is over, tourism industry is heating up, launching a lot of customized promotions.
[Varied]
When it comes to travel, considering varied options is crucial to prepare unexpected situations.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Yu [이름]! Thanks a bunch for sparing some of your time to complete your homework. Your sentences demonstrate clarity and coherence in conveying travel-related information. Each sentence effectively communicates its intended message without ambiguity. However, please take note of the points for improvement as shown in the corrections.
~T. Jenna
[Tour]
These days, the one-day tour is popular since we can enjoy both activities and relaxation.
Correct, or
These days, the one-day tour is popular since we can enjoy both activities and relaxation.
Correct, or
>> In recent times, the popularity of one-day tours has surged due to the opportunity they provide to enjoy a blend of activities and relaxation.
[Tourism]
After pandemic is over, tourism industry is heating up, launching a lot of customized promotions.
>>After the pandemic is over, the tourism industry is heating up, launching a lot of customized promotions.
[Varied]
When it comes to travel, considering varied options is crucial to prepare unexpected situations.
[Tourism]
After pandemic is over, tourism industry is heating up, launching a lot of customized promotions.
>>After the pandemic is over, the tourism industry is heating up, launching a lot of customized promotions.
[Varied]
When it comes to travel, considering varied options is crucial to prepare unexpected situations.
>>When it comes to travel, considering varied options is crucial to prepare for unexpected situations.
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