Vocabulary
학생이 쓴 원문
[Image]
It is easy to take time off in the company by making diligent image in advance.
[Impression]
When I firstly met my boyfriend, shining pupils gave me an intense impression to fall in love with him.
[Influence]
The weather hugely influences our daily condition so that we should check forecast before we go out.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Ms. [Name] [이름]! Your sentences demonstrate a good grasp of vocabulary and attempt to convey various ideas effectively. Keep practicing and paying attention to grammar and sentence structure to further improve your writing skills!
~T. Jenna
[Image]
It is easy to take time off in the company by making diligent image in advance.
>>It is easy to take time off in the company if we make/cultivate a diligent image in advance.
[Impression]
When I firstly met my boyfriend, shining pupils gave me an intense impression to fall in love with him.
>>When I first met my boyfriend, his shining pupils gave me an intense impression that made me fall in love with him.
[Influence]
The weather hugely influences our daily condition so that we should check forecast before we go out.
It is easy to take time off in the company by making diligent image in advance.
>>It is easy to take time off in the company if we make/cultivate a diligent image in advance.
[Impression]
When I firstly met my boyfriend, shining pupils gave me an intense impression to fall in love with him.
>>When I first met my boyfriend, his shining pupils gave me an intense impression that made me fall in love with him.
[Influence]
The weather hugely influences our daily condition so that we should check forecast before we go out.
>>The weather greatly influences our daily condition, so we should check the forecast before going out.
OR
>>The weather exerts a significant influence on our daily well-being, underscoring the importance of checking the forecast before going out.
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