Vocabulary
학생이 쓴 원문
[Anxiousness]
Since we are often overwhelmed by feelings of anxiousness, trying in a new way is not easy.
[Awaken]
To awaken interest and passion in our mind, we should challenge new things by going outside and having time with people.
[thrill]
When we feel a big thrill, it plays a role as a stimulant by giving us continuous dopamine.
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[Anxiousness]
Since we are often overwhelmed by feelings of anxiousness, trying in a new way is not easy.
>>Since we are often overwhelmed by feelings of anxiousness, trying something new is not easy.
Since we are often overwhelmed by feelings of anxiousness, trying in a new way is not easy.
>>Since we are often overwhelmed by feelings of anxiousness, trying something new is not easy.
OR
>> Since we frequently experience overwhelming feelings of anxiousness, attempting something new can be challenging.
[Awaken]
To awaken interest and passion in our mind, we should challenge new things by going outside and having time with people.
>>To awaken interest and passion in our minds, we should challenge ourselves with new things/experiences by going outside and having/spending time with people.
[thrill]
When we feel a big thrill, it plays a role as a stimulant by giving us continuous dopamine.
[Awaken]
To awaken interest and passion in our mind, we should challenge new things by going outside and having time with people.
>>To awaken interest and passion in our minds, we should challenge ourselves with new things/experiences by going outside and having/spending time with people.
[thrill]
When we feel a big thrill, it plays a role as a stimulant by giving us continuous dopamine.
>>When we feel a big thrill, it plays/acts as a stimulant by continuously giving us/releasing dopamine.
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