Vocabulary
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1. accomplishment
Our accomplishment depends on how we spend time to ellaborate some ideas.
2. challenge
We inevitably learn lessons by expereincing challenges where we make a mistake or handle some conflicts.
3. complexity
When we see a problem with strict complexity, thinking a simple way can be a one of the unexpected solution.
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1. accomplishment
Our accomplishment depends on how we spend time to ellaborate some ideas.
>>Our accomplishment depends on how we spend time to elaborate some ideas.
Our accomplishment depends on how we spend time to ellaborate some ideas.
>>Our accomplishment depends on how we spend time to elaborate some ideas.
OR
>>Our accomplishment hinges on the time we dedicate to developing our ideas.
2. challenge
We inevitably learn lessons by expereincing challenges where we make a mistake or handle some conflicts.
>>We inevitably learn lessons by experiencing challenges where we make mistakes or handle some conflicts.
2. challenge
We inevitably learn lessons by expereincing challenges where we make a mistake or handle some conflicts.
>>We inevitably learn lessons by experiencing challenges where we make mistakes or handle some conflicts.
OR
>>We inevitably gain valuable insights by navigating challenges that involve making mistakes and resolving conflicts.
3. complexity
When we see a problem with strict complexity, thinking a simple way can be a one of the unexpected solution.
3. complexity
When we see a problem with strict complexity, thinking a simple way can be a one of the unexpected solution.
>>When we see a problem of strict complexity, thinking in a simple way can be a one of the unexpected solutions.
OR
>>When we encounter a problem of considerable complexity, thinking simply can be one of the unexpected solutions.
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