Vocabulary Assignment
학생이 쓴 원문
invisible : I can see many invisible stars through telescope
magnify : It will magnify when it is near with our eyes even if it is small.
impossible : we can reach our dream unless we think it is impossible.
electricity : sometimes we forget about value of electricity
I did my best. Bye~
강사 첨삭
Hi Kevin!
Wow, you made your homework fast! Thanks, Kevin! See you tomorrow.
-T. Louise
invisible : I can see many invisible stars through telescope>> I can see many invisible stars through telescope. (Be reminded of the punctuation mark.)magnify : It will magnify when it is near with our eyes even if it is small.>> It will magnify small things when we see through it using opur eyes.impossible : we can reach our dream unless we think it is impossible.>> We can’t reach our dream when we think it is impossible.electricity : sometimes we forget about value of electricity>> Sometimes we tend to forget the value of electricity.I did my best.
>> Correct.
Bye~
>> Bye!
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