Voice, music
학생이 쓴 원문
My voice:) I love my voice.
Sing is my life and music is root of my heart.
If my voice change other voice, maybe I don\'t want to keep living.
Music is my everything and I relized I really really love music, singing and my voice
강사 첨삭
Hi Ann:)
Wow, that was very poetic. You indeed have a very beautiful voice based on all the videos that I have watched. Keep it up!
My voice:) I love my voice.
> The thing that I love the most is my voice.
Sing is my life and music is root of my heart.
>> Singing is my life and music is the root of my heart.
If my voice change other voice, maybe I don\'t want to keep living.
>> If my voice change to another voice, maybe I don\'t want to keep living.
Music is my everything and I relized I really really love music, singing and my voice
>>Music is my everything and I realized that I really love music and singing.
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