Volunteer at blood store
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강사 첨삭
Hi, [이름]!
I waited for you in the video class.
I also called your telephone number, but I guess it was your father who answered. He told me to call your mobile number.
I tried to call you, but I only heard a voice prompt.
I even used a different phone, but the same recording was heard.
You can check the recordings on the website or on the page.
Have a good night.
_Teacher Dianne ^_^
Today I went to blood store to volunteer with my mom.
>> Today I went to a blood bank to volunteer with my mom.
I have to stand for 4 hours raising some postcards.
>> correct
It mad me mad,
>> It made me mad.
>> Or: It made me angry.
My mom didn\'t memorize there is a class.
>> My mom didn\'t remember about our class.
And 15minutes before the class mom called to Powerenglish manager. They didn\'t respond right now.
>> And 15 minutes before the class ends, my mom called the Korean manager, but they did not respond right away.
And few minutes later my mom requseted to have a class with phone and she said yes.
>> And few minutes later my mom requested to have a phone class and she said yes.
But there is no calling in phone. And there is a message class was delated.
>> But I didn\'t receive any call and there was a message that the class was canceled.
I waited for calling for 10 minutes but my father said they say I didn\'t respond calling.
>> I waited for your call for 10 minutes, but then my father said that I was not responding to your call.
I was really angry.
>> correct
I checked it there is no phone call to me.And there is just a message it was delated.
>> I checked my phone, but there\'s no missed calls or no one called me. Then I received a message that my class was canceled.
What happened to this class?
>> correct
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