Volunteer at blood store

2017-05-09 · 첨삭 강사 Dianne

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Today I went to blood store to volunteer with my mom.I have to stand for 4 hours raising some postcards.It mad me mad,My mom didn't memorize there is a class. And 15minutes before the class mom called to Powerenglish manager.They didn't respond right now.And few minutes later my mom requseted to have a class with phone and she said yes.But there is no calling in phone. And there is a message class was delated.I waited for calling for 10 minutes but my father said they say I didn't respond calling.I was really angry.I checked it there is no phone call to me.And there is just a message it was delated.What happened to this class?

강사 첨삭

Hi, [이름]!


I waited for you in the video class.

I also called your telephone number, but I guess it was your father who answered. He told me to call your mobile number.

I tried to call you, but I only heard a voice prompt.

I even used a different phone, but the same recording was heard.

You can check the recordings on the website or on the page.

Have a good night.


_Teacher Dianne ^_^


Today I went to blood store to volunteer with my mom.

>> Today I went to a blood bank to volunteer with my mom.

I have to stand for 4 hours raising some postcards.

>> correct

It mad me mad,

>> It made me mad.

>> Or: It made me angry.

My mom didn\'t memorize there is a class. 

>> My mom didn\'t remember about our class.

And 15minutes before the class mom called to Powerenglish manager. They didn\'t respond right now.

>> And 15 minutes before the class ends, my mom called the Korean manager, but they did not respond right away.

And few minutes later my mom requseted to have a class with phone and she said yes.

>> And few minutes later my mom requested to have a phone class and she said yes.

But there is no calling in phone. And there is a message class was delated.

>> But I didn\'t receive any call and there was a message that the class was canceled.

I waited for calling for 10 minutes but my father said they say I didn\'t respond calling.

>> I waited for your call for 10 minutes, but then my father said that I was not responding to your call.

I was really angry.

>> correct

I checked it there is no phone call to me.And there is just a message it was delated.

>> I checked my phone, but there\'s no missed calls or no one called me. Then I received a message that my class was canceled.

What happened to this class?

>> correct

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