Volunteer at Tancheon river

Hi, [이름]!

I think walking is a good exercise for you to be healthy.

And you\'re lucky because you were able to do that. ^^

I also want to try that application you told me. ^^

I hope it will really help us to be healthy and at the same time to be rich. kkk

See you again on Thursday!

_Teacher Dianne ^^

Today all students from Baemyeong middle school go to Tancheon river.

>> Today, all the students from Baemyeong Middle School went to Tancheon river.

I go to there by bus.It takes 35minutes.

>> I went there by bus and it took me 35 minutes to reach the place.

We learned nature from some old grandfather teacher.

>> We learned about nature from a teacher who is an old grandfather.

After the lecture in the park we just take a walk.

>> After the lecture in the park we just took a walk.

It was really bored.

>> It was really boring.

But now I want to walk because of the application that gives money when I walk.

>> correct