Volunteering and field trip

2018-05-25 · 첨삭 강사 Don

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There will be a volunteering and field trip on tommorrow and next monday.Tommorrow will be boring day.I don't like volunteering.It is too sleepy things.Next week's fieldtrip we will go to a steep mountain.It will be fun.

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Hi [이름]!


How was your day today? How will you spend your weekend? Thank you for having the class with me. See you again some other time ^^


T. DON



There will be a volunteering and field trip on tommorrow and next monday.

>> There will be a volunteer field trip from tomorrow until Monday that I will attend to.


Tommorrow will be boring day.

>> Tomorrow will be a boring day.


I don\'t like volunteering.It is too sleepy things.

>> I actually don\'t like to volunteer because it is too boring for me.


Next week\'s fieldtrip we will go to a steep mountain.It will be fun.

>> For our fieldtrip next week, we will go to a steep mountain and I believe that it will be fun and exciting.

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