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Thank you so much for dropping in your composition.:)
Im glad to hear that you enjoyed your stay here in the Philippines.
Talk to you again my dear..
T.Camille
I spent this summer holiday in Manila.
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and It was great.
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In the morning, we slept because of heavy drinking the night before.
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>>We slept at daytime because of hangover.
After waking up, we went to a huge shopping malls like SM mall.
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We also met some friends there.
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Whlie walking on the street near our hotel, I found some beautiful women.
>> While walking on the street near our hotel, I saw some beautiful women.
and I asked them to join our party. so we threw a party in our hotel.
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I also ate some delicious food in a sea side market.
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We bought sea foods like shrimps and lobster and took them to the restaurant for cooking.
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I had them be cooked with chilly sauce, and it was amazingly delicious.
>>I had them cooked in chili sauce, and it was amazingly delicious!
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