W[이름] s[이름]uld be reponsible for old peaple
학생이 쓴 원문
I think that goverment's reponsiblity
Because Graying is very important issue for Human,
so that s[이름]uld solve mega system.
Goverment s[이름]uld be recognize and prepare systematic plan.
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I think that goverment\'s reponsiblity> >I think it is the government\'s responsibility to take care of t[이름]se people.Because Graying is very important issue for Human, >>Being old is a very important issue for humans.so that s[이름]uld solve mega system.>>This must be the government\'s concern.Goverment s[이름]uld be recognize and prepare systematic plan.
>>The government s[이름]uld recognize them and have a specific plan on [이름]w they s[이름]uld be taken care of.
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