waht stands between you and happiness??
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My happy time is to meet with people.
So i think that time limits stands my happy time.
If i have a lot of time, i can many thing (playing, eatting...)
It will be very fun.
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My happy time is to meet with people.
>> My happiness is to meet peopleSo i think that time limits stands my happy time.
>> So, I think time stands between my happiness.If i have a lot of time, i can many thing (playing, eatting...)
>> If I have a lot of time, I will do a lot of things like playing and eating, etc.It will be very fun.
>>CORRECT:
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