Wake up(2)
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Chang Hee was lazy.
So his mom always yells to him.
"Wake up, Chang Hee!!"
One day, his mom was sick.
So she was sleeping.
So he can't wake up on time!!
He ran to his school.
His school is closed and Not everyone stood up outside!
And he ran to his friend Jang ho's house.
But there was only one man.
He said Jang ho's family moved three years ago.
He think, he sleeps three years!! He was scared and afraid!
And than he yells "NO~~~!!"
Wow! It was dream! Next time, he always woke up early~^^
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Chang Hee was lazy.
>>Chang Hee is lazy.
So his mom always yells to him.
>>That\'s why his mother always yells at him.
\"Wake up, Chang Hee!!\"
>>correct
One day, his mom was sick.
>>correct
So she was sleeping.
>>His mom slept for a long time.
So he can\'t wake up on time!!
>>So, he didn\'t wake up on time.
He ran to his school.
>>correct
His school is closed and Not everyone stood up outside!
>>His school is very close to his home.
And he ran to his friend Jang ho\'s house.
>>And went to his friend\'s house, Jang ho.
But there was only one man.
>>But he only saw a man.
He said Jang ho\'s family moved three years ago.
>>He said, \"Jang ho\'s family moved three years ago.\"
He think, he sleeps three years!!
>>He thinks, he slept for three years.
He was scared and afraid!
>>correct
And than he yells \"NO~~~!!\"
>>And the he yells and say \"No!\"
Wow! It was dream! Next time, he always woke up early~^^
>>Wow! It was only a dream. From then on, he always wake up early.
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