Walking
학생이 쓴 원문
There's no doubt that walking is one of my hobbies.
Since I was young, it has been my hobby.
I live in a country now.
So walking in my town is really good because I can feel fresh air
and listen to the birds sing when I walk.
My favorite place is the road on the wide fields.
and most of the time, I walk by myself.
Since walking is affected by weather conditions,
I only walk in clear weather. So I take a walk a lot in spring or fall.
Before going to walk , I always bring my mp3 player with me
because music with walking is great for me.
강사 첨삭
[이름] my dear...
Thats a job well done...
I cant say much but to keep up the good work...
talk to you again later my dear...
T.Cam
There's no doubt that walking is one of my hobbies.>>correct!Since I was young, it has been my hobby.>>correct!I live in a country now.>>correct!
>>I live in a rural area now.So walking in my town is really good because I can feel fresh air and listen to the birds sing when I walk.>>So walking in my town is really good because I can feel the fresh air and I can listen to the chirping birds when I walk.My favorite place is the road on the wide fields.>>correct!
>>My favorite place is the road along the wide fields.and most of the time, I walk by myself.>>correct!Since walking is affected by weather conditions,>>correct!I only walk in clear weather. So I take a walk a lot in spring or fall.>>correct!Before going to walk , I always bring my mp3 player with me>>correct!
>>Before I walk, I always bring my MP3 player with me.because music with walking is great for me.
>>correct!
>>Because listening to music while walking is great for me.
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