walking

I like walking because I can get fresh air. When I go for a walk, I always bring my MP3 player. Also I always wear a fit shoes. It is important to wear shoes that make comfortable feet. It can avoid to hurt my feet. When you go walking, you should dring lots of water. I always bring a bottle of water.

  Hello [이름]!   Your homework is great. Some reminders:Avoid is always followed by a gerund.The other verbs which are in this group: Admit ( confess), appreciate ( being grateful ), avoid ( refuse), complete ( finish sth ), consider, delay, deny ignore),discuss, dislike, enjoy, escape, finish, image, mind= dislike, practice, recall, recommend, suggest, understand. example: I can avoid hurting my feet.   Teacher Venus^^   I like walking because I can get fresh air. >>>CORRECT When I go for a walk, I always bring my MP3 player. >>>CORRECT Also I always wear a fit shoes. >>>Also I always wear shoes that fit. It is important to wear shoes that make comfortable feet.>>>It is important to wear shoes that make my feet comfortable.   It can avoid to hurt my feet.>>>I can avoid hurting my feet.   When you go walking, you should dring lots of water.>>>When you go walking, you should drink lots of water.   I always bring a bottle of water. >>>CORRECT