Walking and question about walking for Rollplay.
학생이 쓴 원문
1. I try to go walking almost every weekend for about 30 to 40 minutes. I usually walk to nearby house with my children. My apartment complex has good walking courses. Before we even start walking . We strech for a good five minutes . Then we are all set. I like walking because then pounding on the knees isn\'t too bad and I use my entire body. After walking we go straight home so that we can take shower and relax on the couch with some TV . That\'s all.
2. I have some questions for you about one of your walking plases you usually go to. I\'d like you to tell me in detail.
Do you warm before you walk? Who do you go with ? Do you go there alone?
Where do you usually walk? What do you do while you walk? Please tell me everything you do while walking.
강사 첨삭
YOU DID A GREAT JOB [이름]. YOU ANSWERED ALL THE QUESTIONS CORRECTLY ALTHOUGH I NEED YOU TO BE VERY CAREFUL WHEN IT COMES TO PUNCTUATIONS.
THAT\'S ALL. THANK YOU! HAVE A GREAT DAY! ^^
-Teacher Elise
1. I try to go walking almost every weekend for about 30 to 40 minutes.
>>I try to go walking almost every weekend for about 30 to 40 minutes.
I usually walk to nearby house with my children.
>>I usually walk to a nearby house with my children.
My apartment complex has good walking courses.
>>My apartment complex has a good walking course.
Before we even start walking . We strech for a good five minutes . Then we are all set.
>>Before we even start walking, we stretch for a good five minutes and then we are all set.
(BE CAREFUL WHEN IT COMES TO PUNCTUATIONS :) )
I like walking because then pounding on the knees isn\'t too bad and I use my entire body.
>>I like walking because the pounding on my knees isn\'t too bad and I use my entire body.
After walking we go straight home so that we can take shower and relax on the couch with some TV . That\'s all.
>>After walking, we go straight home so that we can take a shower and relax on the couch with some TV. That\'s all.
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I have some questions for you about one of your walking plases you usually go to. I\'d like you to tell me in detail.
>> I have some questions for you about the places where you walk. I\'d like you to tell me in detail.
Do you warm before you walk? Who do you go with ? Do you go there alone?
>> Do you warm-up before walking? Who do you go with? Do you go there alone?
Where do you usually walk? What do you do while you walk? Please tell me everything you do while walking.
>> Where do you usually walk? What do you like to do while walking? Could you please tell me everything.
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