wanna ask something
학생이 쓴 원문
Hi Lei ^_^ Thank you for our class~~
I just listened mp3 file which recorded a lesson. My breathe sound was too much noisy. I'm reeeeally sorry about it.mm.. I'll try not to make a anoying sounds... And I want to ask you something. Can you change a method about fixing my grammar error? You corrected every miss l did on the website but it will be more helpful for me that you fix my grammatical error every time. also..How do l improve my voca? Being not able to tell you what wanna say is driving me crazy!!!hhhhhhhhhhhh
.....And just call me Greg. [이름] is too long to call.haha
강사 첨삭
Hi Greg!!
You don’t have to say sorry about yesterday. ^^ You’re asking me on how you could improve your vocabulary, right? Well, my advise is for you to expose yourself to different English materials, such as: newspapers, magazines, English books/novels and even watching America dramas or movies. This is really helpful upon widening your vocabulary range. Just try it. See you later Greg.
Lei J
Hi Lei ^_^ Thank you for our class~~>>correct
I just listened mp3 file which recorded a lesson.
>>I just listened to our mp3 recording
My breathe sound was too much noisy.
>>cThe sound of my breath is too noisy
I'm reeeeally sorry about it.mm..
>>correct
I'll try not to make annoying sounds...
>>correct
And I want to ask you something.
>>correct
Can you change a method about fixing my grammar error?
>>correct
You corrected every miss l did on the website but it will be more helpful for me that you fix my grammatical error every time.
>> You corrected every miss l did on the website but it will be more helpful for me that you fix my grammatical error every time I had one.
also..How do l improve my voca?
>>also, how can I improve my vocabulary?
Being not able to tell you what wanna say is driving me crazy!!!hhhhhhhhhhhh>>Not able to express myself is driving me crazy......And just call me Greg. [이름] is too long to call.haha
>>correct
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